Part four. Spend some time with the newly introduced characters, Choku and Hen. Fun names, right? Right. I bought a new pen to ink these pages, and it sucked. As soon as I did the washing, the old ink started bleeding a sickening pinkish orange color. Thankfully it doesn't come out after some adjustments during scanning, but the actual book looks pretty bad with it. This caused me to switch to a nib for part 5, and it didn't come out too good(part six uses a nib. looks fine). . .so I won't be putting part 5 online. Sucks, but I also don't like how that part was written either. Its still part of the story though, so I'm going to leave it as a blank section and stick it in later or something, I haven't decided. Aha! This section also introduces my favorite character, Rally-kun! He's not significant in the slightest, I just find him enjoyable. The only character in the book so far that wasn't part of the original plan for a game.

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