The second section,Part 2, and I really have trouble naming these chapters, but whatever. The only reason that the comic is broken into 12 pages sections is that , around the time I hit page 12, I wanted to draw a pinup type picture. And so I did. And so to make the book seem uniform, I decided that would be the length of each section. It worked out well at first, but eventually became a bit restricting. I don't know if this'll be the length of the chapters once I start the second book.

Some new characters are introduced this chapter, well, only one. Moya. In the video game, her gimmick was to be very positive and for Mayo to react harshly to her with a spiteful internal monologue as a "joke". That didn't fit the character I gave Mayo in the book(she's rather mellow around most people), so I changed it to a grudge. The reason for the grudge? I don't know if the story will ever get into that to any great degree, but I suppose I'll touch upon it at some point.

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